I'm thinking of writing a story guys, can you help me?

Category: philosophy/religion topics

Post 1 by Sarah Crossland (Always up for a debate. ) on Friday, 10-Jun-2005 12:43:32

Hey guys. I'm thinking about writing a Christian story. Just like our amazing friend and sister Chelsea has done. In this story, I want Christ too be a young man in his early twenties on earth. he is the Son of God, but he hasn't started any of his work yet. It's in the modern day, so Jesus is wearing a suit and tie most of the time. smile. I have loads of ideas, but i would love your helpp. I want a young woman too meet Christ, but not know it is him until later in the story. They keep meeting up, but she doesn't know it is the Lord. She loves God, and has read the Old testament, but, doesn't know it's Jesus. I have many personal reasons why I want it too be a woman who meets Christ, preferabley a prostitute or someone who is an outcast. By the way, i have prayed about this story, and God has given me loads of ideas. I might even make it so that Jesus has a medical problem himself. IE asthma, heart, etc. I don't know yet, these are all idea. This is for another personal reason, but I would love the woman and Jesus too fall in love in the end in more ways than one if you get my meaning. If anyone wants too know the personal reasons I speak of, then i will tell you but there will only be a few people that I will actually tell, Lordlover, thesongwriter, ines, and a few others. People I trust. But yeah, I would love your help. Might even add the idea of Jesus meeting a few young criminals I don't know yet as I said, these r all ideas. Let us know what you think Guys and if you have any ideas, please tell me! May even post my story when it's done. Great idea Chelse, call me a coppy cat if you want. lol! Sazel.

Post 2 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Friday, 10-Jun-2005 12:55:33

Sazel, that is an amazing idea!! What about if, well, you say she doesn't know it is him? Well, maybe you could include that she gets ill one day, and as he heals her she might recognize him or something like that. Might be a weird idea, but ... still.

Post 3 by Sarah Crossland (Always up for a debate. ) on Friday, 10-Jun-2005 13:00:12

good one Ines!!!

Post 4 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Friday, 10-Jun-2005 13:08:34

Well, if he were a kid, he'd like go to a new school or something, and then bullies would make fun of His name, and then he'd become friends with an outcast girl,

Post 5 by Sarah Crossland (Always up for a debate. ) on Friday, 10-Jun-2005 13:09:27

A few things I didn't mention, 1. I have prayed and asked God what he thinks, an the answer i believe I got was, "as long as you don't portray Jesus doing anything wrong," i said, no way Lord, and he answered, "well then enjoy writing your story! Have fun!" so, I do have God's go ahead, and he's given me loads of ideas. Most of which I shared in the very first post. 2. Even if Jesus is a young man on earth wtiha suit and tie, or a little kid as has already been surgested, he is perfect! He will not sin! I think I might make it so that people in ither his class or work, deppending where he goes, think he's a goody goody. He gets tornted etc. Kepp your posts in guys, and I'll let ya know what's happening with it. May take me a bit of time though sad smiles, because I got loads of...... yeah you guessed it, Collige work! groan! Sazel.

Post 6 by Sarah Crossland (Always up for a debate. ) on Friday, 10-Jun-2005 13:14:33

I may even give Jesus a different name, like he comes down too Earth name Mark or something. So no one spots it. that it's really the Lord and Saviour!

Post 7 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Friday, 10-Jun-2005 13:59:53

Yeah, that would be a good idea!!!! And, Mel, your idea is great I think. Sazel, the idea of letting him meet a few young criminals is a great idea, if I were you I would include that. He may help them to stop being criminals.

Post 8 by Sarah Crossland (Always up for a debate. ) on Friday, 10-Jun-2005 14:48:50

Lordlover, Thesongwirter, ines, please here this! I'm not a rude Christian, no way! but, I'm afraid that a lot of my personal inner feelings are gonna come out in this story because of the personal reasons. If you want too read it, please PM me your email address. Please don't quicknote it, because if you PM it, I can save it in the messege box. I don't think the save haven is the best bord too post it. There may be a little language in it that I don't want herd by young ears. It'll only be what's spoken by the characters, (except Christ, AKA mark, smiles) but, just thought I'd warn you. You wouldn't catch me using that word myself, but, i am gonna get a lot of my chest in this story. But, only you guys and a couple of others will know my personal point. What I'm getting at I mean. Because the woman in the story is partly going too be me. But only you guys know why. So, if you want it, please PM me. But, keep your ideas coming in on this bord. Thanks everyone, Sazel.

Post 9 by Sarah Crossland (Always up for a debate. ) on Friday, 10-Jun-2005 15:31:01

Hey you guys, any chance you could help me, if I PM you a bible quote or near enough, could you help me fine it? I may put the verses in I don't know. But, could you be my bible scollars? smiles. I hardly know the word yet. I'm gonna read parts of the bible for help with it. So, some quotes may come directly from the word. I really would apriciate your help. Actually, God's just given me an idea. If you guys see any good quotes that may be useful, could you post them on here please? Like quotes that have some sort of relevance too the story? Rite well anyways, i'm getting started rite now! The final title is....... the man in glory. Sazel

Post 10 by Happy Little Faith (One day closer to eternity! Wahoooooooo!) on Saturday, 11-Jun-2005 13:27:58

sounds good sissy. I am willing to read it. I will send you my email address.

Post 11 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Monday, 13-Jun-2005 4:07:51

I will try and find a good bible version online so that I can help you the next time.

Post 12 by Siriusly Severus (The ESTJ 1w9 3w4 6w7 The Taskmaste) on Monday, 11-Feb-2008 18:06:00

Jesus shouldn't have any problems. I mean you mensioned heart, but if he's perfect.

Well, how about
john 3-16
How about the gay issue. I don't agree, but this is the Bible.
"If a man also lies with mankind, as he lies with a woman both of them have committed an abomination: they shall surely be put to death;their blood shall be upon them." Leviticus 20:13
"thou shalt not lie with mankind, as with womankind: it is abomination. Neither shalt thou lie with any beast to defile thyself therewith: neither shall any woman stand before a beast to lie down with thereto:it is confusion." Leviticus 18:22,23
mankind- man
"There shall be no # of the daughters of Israel, nor a sodomite of the sons of Israel." Deuteronomy 23:17